Wednesday, 1 November 2017

Our new classroom.

I am sitting on the on turf and I see people building 
Two men are carrying roof iron.
I am hearing hacksaws 
It kind of sounds like nails banging into the wall 
I hear an echo sound as something hits the ground.


WALT use interesting words to describe. The word I like best in my poem is echoing. A word I really liked in Aidan's poem is coloured paint.


 


























 






























































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